November 3, 2008

Wiki proofing new version of AHBP: "Acknowledgments"

This is a comment thread for "Acknowledgments" in the revised version of Steve Sailer's America's Half-Blood Prince: Barack Obama's "Story of Race and Inheritance" that was posted online 11/3/08:

In the comments below, feel free to list typos, errors, and other comments.

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2 comments:

  1. Glaivester11/3/08, 9:00 PM

    Page xvi: "...this book is no doubt filled with numberless typos..."

    I think "innumerable" would be a better word than "numberless," unless you were deliberately being self-reerential there.

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  2. Garland11/3/08, 10:32 PM

    "Dont map to Rowling's HBP"

    Ah but come on, her HBP pretended to be one thing but turned out to be something else, and so does Obama pretend to...

    okay but seriously:

    "Don't bother. This book is too idiosyncratic to have an effect on the Election"

    Should now be rewritten, no? It made sense for the last week, but as of a few hours from not it will also be too late to have an effect...

    Of course you could simply change to: "have an effect on the re-election."

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